Today in class we evaluated each others websites. Our websites are only in the first draft stage so the feedback we gave, helps everyone further develop their website into the finished professional product. Here is the feedback we received:
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Monday, 19 January 2015
Thursday, 20 November 2014
Website Reviews
GraceStarr
Whats Good:
Nice Colour schemes, Look really professional, good consistency across the house styles on all pages of the website. Dosent Need a lot of work just a bit of polishing here and there.
The Tweeks:
The menu could be made a little bit bigger, On the 'About Grace' page the pictures would look better re arranged so that the page finishes where the bottom of the text is. Across all the pages the 'X' next to the official site title either needs to be made more obvious (made Bigger) or removed. also the Twitter button on the home page needs re-sizing, looks a bit lost at the moment.
Nicolas Alexander
Whats good:
Flows nicely, nice use of colour, pages are well filled out with text and information. nice text used as well.
Even better if:
On the 'Tour Dates' page the text is all different fonts, needs to keep to the house style! The images on the website need finishing rather than just using the green screen background. Loads of grammatical mistakes as-well! Picture on the bio page is really fuzzy. The little welcome message was removed.
Encoded:
Whats Good:
The design and layout of the website if great, i also like the consistency throughout the publications ( the cloud background on the tour poster etc) The way that the pages change is really nice aswell. The Countdown is cool, but what is it for? a tour? a gig? a meet and greet?
Even Better If:
Your menu worked correctly, having issues getting back to the home page / band page once i have moved on from them. Double countdown on the album page? would be better if the random one to the left hand side of the screen was removed. The pictures in the gallery don't seem to fit properly, text is cut of, top of heads etc. the countdown on the contact page isn't doing anything...
Cosmo
i like the honey comb effect for the gallery,the menu and Title work well and the font used are really nice.
Even Better if:
there was something on the homepage rater than Just the twitter / Facebook feeds, Some pages are empty and will be filled with time. Each pages title should match the text used in menu / the main title for the website. Maybe make 'Cosmo' bigger at the top of the page.
Hybrid Beauty
Whats Good:
Nice homepage, good images used throughout, the merchandise, the way the Facebook icon changes to a little arrow. The text used is nice.
Even better if:
there was a title at the top of each page with hybrid beauty, the menu bar was larger, there are loads of features in wix to make your online shop actually work.
Alleyways:
Whats good:
Nice homepage, good text / colour schemes , the titles for each page being little images- nice
Even Better If:
the image on the home page is slightly pixelated, would be nice if it wasn't, the menu font was slightly larger- bit on the small side currently. loads of grammatical mistakes, maybe a bit of a shift about with the menu, the alleyways info should come earlier on in the menu selection - maybe make the UK tour dates into a poster. also when you hover over the images it comes up with 'IMG_00657' or something like that, looks a bit pants when it does that.
Alex Echo
Good Looking website, nice menu and title, Pictures look really good and also the connect page looks good.
Even Better If:
the merchandise needs a lot of work, use a store app in wix and make sure the images arnt as pixelated as they are now. Is there supposed to be a menu par at the bottom of the page? looks a bit random.why is Sam is the pictures ? hes not mentioned, especially as he is a solo artist? either the font or the colour of the font needs changing on the info page, too hard to read currently.
Jaya:
Whats Good:
Good images, and nice transitions between pages.
Even better if :
The Maroon and black colour scheme... dosent look good. The website itself dosent fit on the page - pay attention to the margins on wix! Page titles are out of focus / pixelated also the image on the home screen is blurry, videos and online shop pages need completing, pay attention to 'See more' buttons, currently hard to see and very small!
Whats Good:
Nice Colour schemes, Look really professional, good consistency across the house styles on all pages of the website. Dosent Need a lot of work just a bit of polishing here and there.
The Tweeks:
The menu could be made a little bit bigger, On the 'About Grace' page the pictures would look better re arranged so that the page finishes where the bottom of the text is. Across all the pages the 'X' next to the official site title either needs to be made more obvious (made Bigger) or removed. also the Twitter button on the home page needs re-sizing, looks a bit lost at the moment.
Nicolas Alexander
Whats good:
Flows nicely, nice use of colour, pages are well filled out with text and information. nice text used as well.
Even better if:
On the 'Tour Dates' page the text is all different fonts, needs to keep to the house style! The images on the website need finishing rather than just using the green screen background. Loads of grammatical mistakes as-well! Picture on the bio page is really fuzzy. The little welcome message was removed.
Encoded:
Whats Good:
The design and layout of the website if great, i also like the consistency throughout the publications ( the cloud background on the tour poster etc) The way that the pages change is really nice aswell. The Countdown is cool, but what is it for? a tour? a gig? a meet and greet?
Even Better If:
Your menu worked correctly, having issues getting back to the home page / band page once i have moved on from them. Double countdown on the album page? would be better if the random one to the left hand side of the screen was removed. The pictures in the gallery don't seem to fit properly, text is cut of, top of heads etc. the countdown on the contact page isn't doing anything...
Cosmo
i like the honey comb effect for the gallery,the menu and Title work well and the font used are really nice.
Even Better if:
there was something on the homepage rater than Just the twitter / Facebook feeds, Some pages are empty and will be filled with time. Each pages title should match the text used in menu / the main title for the website. Maybe make 'Cosmo' bigger at the top of the page.
Hybrid Beauty
Whats Good:
Nice homepage, good images used throughout, the merchandise, the way the Facebook icon changes to a little arrow. The text used is nice.
Even better if:
there was a title at the top of each page with hybrid beauty, the menu bar was larger, there are loads of features in wix to make your online shop actually work.
Alleyways:
Whats good:
Nice homepage, good text / colour schemes , the titles for each page being little images- nice
Even Better If:
the image on the home page is slightly pixelated, would be nice if it wasn't, the menu font was slightly larger- bit on the small side currently. loads of grammatical mistakes, maybe a bit of a shift about with the menu, the alleyways info should come earlier on in the menu selection - maybe make the UK tour dates into a poster. also when you hover over the images it comes up with 'IMG_00657' or something like that, looks a bit pants when it does that.
Alex Echo
Good Looking website, nice menu and title, Pictures look really good and also the connect page looks good.
Even Better If:
the merchandise needs a lot of work, use a store app in wix and make sure the images arnt as pixelated as they are now. Is there supposed to be a menu par at the bottom of the page? looks a bit random.why is Sam is the pictures ? hes not mentioned, especially as he is a solo artist? either the font or the colour of the font needs changing on the info page, too hard to read currently.
Jaya:
Whats Good:
Good images, and nice transitions between pages.
Even better if :
The Maroon and black colour scheme... dosent look good. The website itself dosent fit on the page - pay attention to the margins on wix! Page titles are out of focus / pixelated also the image on the home screen is blurry, videos and online shop pages need completing, pay attention to 'See more' buttons, currently hard to see and very small!
Tuesday, 21 October 2014
Merchandise Development
Recently I have been working on James Couleur's Merchandise. Completing this task has helped me rediscover my Photoshop skills and also develop them further. Below is an example of how the design for the mug has developed and become our finished product. The first Mug was the first design, and the last one is our final design.
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